The whole damn thing! With new suggestions. Thoughts?

 

Hi my friend,

Here's the whole thing. What do you think? 

 

A girl keeps a journal to battle her depression but instead, documents a murder.

This was my concept so I'm reasonably happy with it. But given that it's my best work, I want the best possible cover I can get.  I'm going to talk to another designer, if she's available, and see what she can come up with. Everything is still open.

Do you think the rear cover text is a little hard to read? 

Here are the titles I'm thinking of. 

I've highlighted the ones that seem to be popular, which I like too.

The Girl Who Changed Everything

The Girl who Feels Too Much

Beautiful Trouble

The Weight of Other People

The Things They Don't See

The Year We Fell Apart

The Girl Who Saw It Coming

Dear Laura

Jai's Journal

The Wrong Kind of Beautiful

The Last Year of Innocence

The Pages Between Us

What Happened to Laura?

The Beautiful Damage

The Gravity of Laura

I appreciate your opinion, even if you've given it before.

And I appreciate you, more than you know.

Peace

Anthony

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